Lifeless

Ever since through the window
I last looked at you
My heart bleeds solemn words
Speech can never tell;
Song can’t sing nor tear cry
Nor touch express nor thought fly.

I know I will look at you
Ere three days are over
But they aren’t three days, nay
Three lives I have to wait
For without your smiling face
Lifeless, I always am.

– hussainweb

I wrote a poem completely unplanned and after a very long time. I just got in a bus to the train station and felt like writing it. It might not be perfect but it says close to what I want to say and I am happy for it.


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8 responses to “Lifeless”

  1. Pk Avatar
    Pk

    I really liked it!!

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      Anonymous

      Thanks!

  2. Prasad Avatar
    Prasad

    Beautiful…

  3. Tsezzy Avatar
    Tsezzy

    my goodness ,,,, from where did u learn this english?? Shakespeare? …awesome!!!

  4. Zoy Avatar

    That was great Husain… makes you re-read to actually… :)

  5. Shabbir Goga Avatar
    Shabbir Goga

    Type your comment here. Its really good !! to express your inner thouths

  6. Sumanth053 Avatar
    Sumanth053

    Very nice Husain!

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    Anonymous

    Thank you all for your comments. I didn’t imagine I would get this kind of response. It was all impromptu.

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